Feedback on my draft, not a rewrite
Here is my draft: [PASTE] Give feedback only: the three strongest parts, the three biggest weaknesses, any unclear arguments, and questions a reader might ask. Do not rewrite sentences. I'll make the edits myself.
Here is my draft: [PASTE] Give feedback only: the three strongest parts, the three biggest weaknesses, any unclear arguments, and questions a reader might ask. Do not rewrite sentences. I'll make the edits myself.